User:Ijones459/Alkali Bee/Anabishop99 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ijones459


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Alkali bee
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
You did an excellent job on this draft! I think it looks great, and is almost ready to go. I think your Lead section has all of the necessary requirements. Furthermore, the article's content looks great. You covered a wide range of topics about this bee, and I feel as if I came away with a good understanding of all aspects of this animal. You used a great range of sources, and I can tell this work was thoroughly researched. You also did a nice job linking terms throughout the article. One note that I have is that there were a few typos and grammatical errors in the article - I particularly noticed these in the "Predators and Parasites" section. There was nothing too bad, I just think the article needs one good thorough read to fix these small typos. The article is very rooted in factual information, and stays neutral throughout. You did a great job, and I think this article is good to go once the minor edits are finished. Great job!