User:Ikhan-rollins/Nausicaä of the Valley of the Wind (film)/Brandon Shortrede Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)

Imran and Ian

Ikhan-rollins

Ian F Whitman


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ikhan-rollins/Nausica%C3%A4_of_the_Valley_of_the_Wind_(film)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nausicaä of the Valley of the Wind (film)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I like the extra notes and information, you already have a lot of topics you can add for the next steps of the assignments, and looks like you are going the right way.

Even though I haven't seen the movie, your article is well written, easy to read and has a clear lead. The information about the animals and their behavior seems relevant to the topic, but I have a few questions that might be good to explain in your article. Even if they are fictional beings, are there any behavior that is unrealistic to any certain species of animals? Is there any example of Anthropomorphism when animals reciprocate human emotions? Is this an inaccurate behavior for animals?