User:Ikhan-rollins/Nausicaä of the Valley of the Wind (film)/Imartins34 Peer Review

I really liked your draft. It has a strong lead where we, readers, can see the importance of the topic your are drafting about. The lead has an importance that is later on discussed. Another aspect is if the draft has a neutral content and in my opinion it has, it doesn't show what is your opinion about the topic. I think that the extra information and notes that you made at the end would definitely add to the draft, so I would recommend adding some of this info. I really liked the way you guys cited "result of the environment it evolved in"!

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ikhan-rollins


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 * User:Ikhan-rollins/Nausicaä of the Valley of the Wind (film)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nausicaä of the Valley of the Wind (film)

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