User:Ikhan-rollins/Nausicaä of the Valley of the Wind (film)/Zxmaria Peer Review

'''Your goal with a peer review is to identify specific ways the article could be improved, and note any major problems that ought to be fixed. Consider these questions:'''

'''Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?'''

Everything seemed relevant to the article topic.

'''Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?'''

The article seems to be neutral. There are just insights on how "The species are able to reciprocate emotions such as fear and anger in situations where the humans and animals were coexisting."

Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?

I would explain how even though the animals are fictional they resemble real life animals. I would also explain that the animals being able to reciprocate emotions is an act of anthropomorphizing even though they are fictional.

'''Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?'''

Link worked and supports the claim.

'''Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?'''

So far the article explains how the fictional animals act towards humans so there are no biased notes.

'''Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added?'''

Information is not out of date and I would just add how anthropomorphizing takes part in the movie.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ikhan-rollins


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ikhan-rollins/Nausicaä of the Valley of the Wind (film)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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