User:Ikhemani/Regulation and monitoring of pollution/Georgesummers Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ikhemani


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ikhemani/Regulation_and_monitoring_of_pollution?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Regulation and monitoring of pollution

Evaluate the drafted changes
The information that you are planning on adding to the article are well researched and make sense to be added. However, your writing needs work. The grammar and spelling has errors. Your word choice and language is not formal enough and doesn't seem completely neutral as a result. Also, your references are not added in correctly, which makes it hard to tell if all of the information comes from this one source.