User:IllusiveAttic11/Enrique Angelelli/PspOU Peer Review

General info
IllusiveAttic11 (Ben)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:IllusiveAttic11/Enrique_Angelelli?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Enrique Angelelli

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Early life gives good background info on Angelelli, good context to his actions on return to Cordoba.

Good change in the La Rioja section and source in regards to Pope Paul VI.

Dirty War section has its content reinforced with proper content.

Within the murder section, the first word should be On instead of In for proper grammatical sense. The last paragraph in the draft has "In April 1990," which should be re-written to On April of 1990." Rest of article is fine in regards to grammar.

Sources are diverse in authors and are up to date with more recent dates.

Each section appears to take a neutral stance in regards to Angelelli, no clear biases towards him or anyone else.