User:IllyFerg/Neolithic decline/Jay2saucy Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

KindleHoodie


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Neolithic decline


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I think that you should have separate sections for things such as the background/history of the disease, instead of the long one paragraph. Have a who section dedicated to the symptoms of the plague. Add a few more sections into the article. I like that you have a lot of resources and references already.