User:IllyFerg/Neolithic decline/Voverbo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

IllyFerg/Neolithic Decline


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:IllyFerg/Neolithic decline
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Neolithic decline

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: There is not information here, so I will do my best to give some sort of direction. The lead is meant to be a sort of introduction to the topic. So, questions you could probably answer in this section are "what was the Neolithic decline?" What populations did it effect? Why does it matter? Gloss over the possible causes for the decline, but do not go into too much detail or else you will be discrediting or crossing the line into the body of the article.

Content: The content just goes over the possible plague explanation for the decline. It has a good structure already. So, I'm not sure what could be added to that specific section. There could be some research done to see if there are other possible explanations for the decline. There could also be a section of the effects this caused to the human population.

References: The references are all recent, which is good. Recent research is typically more reliable than old research. Something that may be good, if it hasn't already been done, is just read through the sources already there and see if there is anything that could be added from them that isn't already there.