User:Iloparco/Evaluate an Article

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Joan of England, Queen of Sicily

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I chose this article because i would like to learn about important female figures in the middle ages. I also am intersted in Italian royalty during the middle ages. My prelimimary impression was that she was both a queen in England and Sicily.

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This articled was very detailed and provided great insight of Joan of Englands life and royal status. This article seems very accurate and provides multiple citations to prove this evidence.Something the article does lack is "inline citations". I believe additonal details of her death and her childs death could be included.I also would consider investigating information of her brother, King Richard of England l. This articles has a very clear, non-bias tone that explained details of her marriage and how she served as a Queen.A point that is underepresented is the fact about why her brother wanted to take her back to England. Even though the sources are reliable, there is lack on inline citations which can question the articles credibility. This article is considered part of the Sicily wiki Project.On the talk page they discuss weather or not the rumor of a unborn son is true.They also discuss how it would have been illegal for conception at the age of 14.They challange the truth of this law because she had got married at the young age of 11. I think it is intersting to discuss the idea of legal conception because with previous information, those in the middle ages married very young and i did not know there was a law about the age of conception.