User:Ilovebagels15/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(Provide a link to the article here.) Trauma-informed approaches in education

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.) '''I chose this article because I felt it was where my research is best placed. At first I wasn't sure if it was the right article because it does have a lot of errors that need to be fixed but I feel as if my work can make it a stronger article.'''

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.) '''The wikipedia page has good information that is really useful and in connection with my connection. Although it's a good base I feel like it's missing a lot which will make it even better. It dives right in into a certain topic and doesn't give an overall statement about the reader will be focusing on in the article. Not necessarily a thesis but an overview about the topics. It doesn't have counterclaims and feels very one-sided. There's one section where I can't recall right now but it talks about only the students point of view and not necessarily including everyone in the picture like administrators and educators. There are no images which means that it's just a lot of writing. I think that images can help break up the information and give the reader's eyes a break. I think by taking out some of the information because it does seem like a lot of unnecessary information that doesn't need to be included, it will make it an easier read for others.'''