User:Ilytehani/Achatinella fulgens/Kiko1507 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ilytehani


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ilytehani/Achatinella_fulgens?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Achatinella fulgens

Evaluate the drafted changes
The information provided is clear and informative. There is a picture provided to see what the species looks like. The style of writing is not biased and gives perspective to the historic use of the species within the Hawaiian culture. I believe this is a good informative article that when finalized will provide an in depth description of this species in Hawaii.