User:ImGemstone/Kris Dresen/Lou-Andrea Callewaert Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kris Dresen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ImGemstone/Kris_Dresen?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Compared to the original draft I peer reviewed earlier, this draft has a lot more information and the organization has improved. As far as improving the overall quality of the article, I can't think of anything. The article is far more complete than the original version. The strengths of the added content are clear as every piece of information is properly cited and the reasoning behind everything listed has been elaborated upon based on the sources.