User:ImGemstone/Kris Dresen/Seracallahan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ImGemstone


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ImGemstone/Kris_Dresen?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your tone is neutral and your writing is succinct. Your use of headings for organization makes the article easy to read and it's easy to differentiate information in order to find it quickly. All of the information so far is relevant. I like how you connected people/things mentioned in the article with links of other articles to cement Dresen's importance and significance to the platform. Maybe you could add more as you continue or add to what you've written but not linked when you go through and edit. You also used some secondary sources which is good. The only other thing I would say is there is the template section at the bottom that says "Article Draft," "Lead," and "Article Body" that you can go ahead and delete if you're not using it, and just make sure to proofread in case of typos!