User:Imanqadir/Refugee law/Reethespiethes Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Imanqadir


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Imanqadir/Refugee_law?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Refugee law

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * 1) First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way?
 * 2) Really good job explaining the Refugee Act of 1980 and why it was important! This section is super concise and adds a lot to the article.
 * 3) What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement?
 * 4) "Fleeing communism" sounds very political; might be worth changing it to "fleeing the Soviet Union." Also, I would definitely add a citation at the end of the first paragraph you wrote, especially since it includes direct quotations.
 * 5) What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article?
 * 6) In general: cite cite cite! Wikipedia likes to auto-delete things that aren't cited, and at the very least your contributions will get flagged.
 * 7) Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know.
 * 8) I was considering adding a history section to Asylum in the United States so this gave some great insights!