User:Imanqadir/Refugee law/Yasminemahm. Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Imanqadir


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Imanqadir/Refugee_law?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Refugee law

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content

I think it was a good decision to add to the US refugee law section because it is very brief. Instead of just saying "fleeing from Communism", I would change the wording to mention something about the specific countries and/or political instability that they were leaving. The article does not mention anything about current global debates in the sector, and I think it would be something useful to mention. Additionally, the other sections are very short. This could be something to mention in the Talk Pages to be improved.

Tone and Balance

The section is neutral in tone and mainly factual. I did not notice any grammatical or spelling errors. No specific viewpoints are exaggerated.

Organization

I think it would be a good idea to better transition the added sentences to the beginning of the section. I also think that the section should be analyzed more chronologically. The section begins with the 1951 Convention and 1961 protocol, but then goes into your section on the 1940s. I think it would be more easily understandable if the section on US Refugee Law is written including all of the noteworthy historical legislation on refugees in the United States.

Sources and References

I don't see any sources for the section you added. Adding relevant scholarly sources is necessary,