User:Imanqadir/Right to asylum/Reethespiethes Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Imanqadir


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Imanqadir/Right_to_asylum?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Right of asylum

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way?
 * 2) Last paragraph was really interesting and does a good job addressing the criticisms raised in the paragraph before.
 * 3) What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement?
 * 4) Can't think of any significant changes, this was really well done.
 * 5) What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article?
 * 6) It looks like the second sentence you added never got finished, so just keep that in mind as something to fix! Also needs citations after the parts about 9/11 and the final paragraph.
 * 7) Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know.
 * 8) This subsection links to the article I'm working on, so it was really interesting to see the similarities/differences in the two pages.