User:Imasciencer/Slime layer/Sieradzkig Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? I am reviewing the article written by Imasciencer.
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Slime layer

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
 * The lead is informative, but slightly wordy. For instance, "Specifically, this consists mostly of..." is a wordy transition between sentences.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * The lead defines what the slime layer and what it consists of.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * No. The lead does not mention anything related to evolutionary adaptation. There is a brief moment of discussing structure (e.g. exopolysaccharids, glycoproteins, glycolipids, etc.).
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * The lead describes that the slime layer is easily removable, and I do not see any other mention of this later on in the article. It also says the slime layere is a subset of glycocalyx, but I do not see anything about a glycocalyx in the evolutionary adaptation section.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
 * The lead is moderately concise. It does not contain too much detail.

Lead evaluation
Overall, the lead is a nice beginning to the article. I would recommend rewording the second sentence to introduce it better. Also, the first sentence has the statement "bacteria cells." I am not sure if this is supposed to be "bacterial cells".

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * The content is interesting and relative to the topic. However, there is a description of capsules and biofilms which are not particularly relevant to the discussion of slime layer structure. I feel like this could even be moved to evolutionary adaptation to discuss the similarities and differences to other prokaryotic structures.
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * Three out of the seven sources are from the 1960s and 70s. It is really amazing to me that there does not seem to be more information regarding the slime layer.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * As I mentioned, the capsule and biofilm do not seem very relevant. I feel like it would be interesting to delve into how the slime layer is produced, if they are specific to certain bacterial species, why they are important for understanding, etc.

Content evaluation
I really feel the content can be improved upon. There is good content there, but there could be more detail or discussion into various topics concerning the slime layer. Also, I think the last sentence of the first paragraph under evolutionary adaptation needs to be deleted because it only says "Additionally, it is". It would also be interesting to understand how antibiotics damage the slime layer and what mechanisms may be involved.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * The content seems neutral with no evidence of bias.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * No
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * I feel like many of the statements made could have more evidence and detail.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
 * No

Tone and balance evaluation
Overall, the article is written well. Again, I am left wanting to know more about the slime layer in detail.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * The only source I find questionable is the first source because it is from a website. The sixth source is also from a website. Other than that, all other sources seem reliable despite the dates on some.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * Looking through the types of sources, there is definitely diversity and breadth. I do think there are more sources out there that would be helpful. Upon a Google search, I found the scientific article "Phenotypic and genotypic methods for identification of slime layer production, efflux pump activity, and antimicrobial resistance genes as potential causes of the antimicrobial resistance of some mastitis pathogens from farms in Menoufia, Egypt" which was published in 2019.
 * Are the sources current?
 * Three of the seven sources are not current.
 * Check a few links. Do they work?
 * The links that I checked do work.

Sources and references evaluation
Do more searching of your topic and find more scientific articles that are more recent. They are definitely out there, and you can get really creative with the type of information they provide.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Yes
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * I keep seeing "bacteria cell" rather than "bacterial cell".
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
 * I think more content could be added, but it does seem organized well.

Organization evaluation
Organization seems good. I think capsule and biofilm should go into more detail about their structure to warrant being placed in the structure section.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * N/A
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * N/A
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * N/A
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
 * N/A

Images and media evaluation
N/A

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * N/A
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * I think more sources could be found.
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * N/A
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?
 * I see links, but there could be more words that are linked such as microorganisms, bacterial colonies, and antibodies. I do not see other specific articles linked.

New Article Evaluation
This is not a new article, but more improvements can be made if possible.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * The amount of content presently in the article seems complete.
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * The content goes into more detail and relates the slime layer to other structures to aid in understanding.
 * How can the content added be improved?
 * Add more detail, organize the content better, find more recent sources, look into specific structural details.

Overall evaluation
Overall, I think the article is interesting. There are some errors such as incomplete sentences, or inconsistency in naming. I really think more detail could be added. This article is already good, but it can be so much better. I wish I could know more!