User:Immune2inaccuracy/Immune complex/Nxxxdine Peer Review

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(provide username) Immune2inaccuracy
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Immune complex
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):The content added was relevant to the topic of the Elimination of opsonized immune complexes, which is related to the lead immune complex. There are a lot of important details of the Type I FcγRs activation cascade, and may be important to provide a comprehensive understanding of the process. An important suggestion for improvement would be to expand on the ITAM signaling pathway and provide more specific examples or details about the phosphorylation of amino acids and how it leads to the elimination of the opsonized immune complex. I believe this will help in revealing the mechanisms involved in the elimination of opsonized immune complexes. Additionally, touching base with the ITAM signaling pathway and the phosphorylation of specific amino acids within the sequence of proteins will shed light on the molecular events that drive the elimination process.

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