User:ImplicitPandemonium/Naqada/Archaeologyslay Peer Review

General info
(ImplicitPandemonium)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:ImplicitPandemonium/Naqada
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Naqada

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead was not touched. Most changes were made to the Archaeology section of the article. All of this content that was added appears to be relevant to the topic as it concerns archaeological finds uncovered at Naqada. Because the information only talks about archaeological finds, it seems correct to determine the information as neutral. The article already has many sources and adding another for the archaeological finds is not only required but is also beneficial to the credibility of the information and article as a whole. The more resources, the better.