User:Imr254/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Visual release hallucinations
 * Article Evaluation
 * -content is relevant, is written neutrally, and citations are reliable. Some claims do not have citations. Needs more information under the subheadings, and some wording is awkward (for example, under treatment it says, "some charities provide specialist hallucination counseling "buddies" (people who have had CBS, or have CBS and are no longer fazed by it) to talk to on the telephone." the phrase: "no longer fazed by it" sounds too casual. There should also be a subheading for organizations that support CBS!
 * Sources
 * https://papers.nips.cc/paper/4097-hallucinations-in-charles-bonnet-syndrome-induced-by-homeostasis-a-deep-boltzmann-machine-model.pdf
 * https://www.aao.org/eye-health/diseases/what-is-charles-bonnet-syndrome
 * https://rarediseases.info.nih.gov/diseases/10343/charles-bonnet-syndrome
 * https://www.aao.org/eye-health/diseases/what-is-charles-bonnet-syndrome
 * https://rarediseases.info.nih.gov/diseases/10343/charles-bonnet-syndrome

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Musical hallucinations


 * Article Evaluation
 * -content is more or less relevant, certain information should be under different headings. All claims have citations and sources seem reliable. The heading, "Description", needs a lot more work and the info isn't necessarily relevant for the description. Introduction of the article also needs more brief direct statements. It is written neutrally and gives good in depth reports on certain causes.


 * Sources
 * https://www.tinnitus.org.uk/musical-hallucination#:~:text=Musical%20hallucination%20(MH)%20is%20the,this%20is%20known%20as%20tinnitus.
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC5420178/
 * https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fpsyg.2015.00814/full

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Phantom limb


 * Article Evaluation
 * -content is relevant, is written neutrally, and has reliable sources. Certain claims are not sourced. I am not really sure why one of the headings of the article is also titled "phantom limb syndrome" as opposed to just "history" or "description". A few statements seem contradictory (how the author describes phantom limb in two different ways in the lead). Could have more info under the subheadings, "neural mechanisms". In the talk, someone brings up a point about how some post-op transgender men and women also experience similar symptoms-could be interesting to bring this into the article as well.


 * Sources
 * https://www.winchesterhospital.org/health-library/article?id=96857
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC6354174/
 * https://www.jci.org/articles/view/94003
 * https://bjanaesthesia.org/article/S0007-0912(17)36348-1/fulltext

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