User:Indiginkgo/Brocchinia reducta/Katiegarce Peer Review

General info
Indiginkgo
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Indiginkgo/Brocchinia_reducta?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Brocchinia reducta

Evaluate the drafted changes
Original lead of the article is very clunky and short. Updated version reads much more smooth and presents information clearly. Content added clears up or “smoothies out” any wrinkles from the original lead. The overall tone of the new lead is very neutral and professional. Most of the new resources are lab based, but are still very reliable and useable. Old references our touch and go for working. Original content is minimal, but editor is setting up the lead to present or be able to present more well rounded information. More images will be added. Overall impression is it’s a very strong edit despite limited resources available or found.