User:Inestomic/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Andy Schor

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because he is the mayor of Lansing. Initially, the article is very short and doesn't seem to cover much of his time in office or much of his early life.

Evaluate the article
The lead section of the article does a good job of introducing who Andy Schor is and his role in office, although it is a very short introduction.

The overall content of the article does contain important aspects of who Schor is, but it is missing a lot of pieces within like more of his early life or his early career. The content within is fairly up to date, it was most recently edited in May of this year. A lot of the content within the article is more about when he was elected and how long he served, it could include more of the actions he took during his time in office.

The tone of the article is neutral, it doesn't seem to take any sides within it.

The article has a well-written quality to it, I like how it is clear and concise with the way the sentences are formed.

This article is apart of 2 Wikiprojects according to the talk page, but there are no behind the scenes conversations. There is one edit from a bot, so it does make me curious then how many people are contributing to this page because it has only a little bit amount of information about Schor.