User:Inesuwineza123/Chewing/Averagestudentt Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

inesuwineza123


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Inesuwineza123/Chewing?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chewing

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The content added was neutral and factual. I think the use of images in this particular article would be extremely beneficial.
 * In the "Chocking" section of the article I really liked how you included how cattle and other animals chew in different motions/patterns. That is really interesting!! I think for the sentence directly after the sentence regarding cattle it would be helpful to include the specific problems that improper chewing can lead to.
 * The material is very easy to read for all audiences who would be interested. I love how well organized the information is and offers in depth details on the process pf chewing without it being too overwhelming and difficult to understand.
 * The only reference listed is current and reputable. I'm not sure if there are more sources used in this article draft, but the one I do see is a great source!!
 * Overall, the information presented is very concise and is easily interpreted. I believe that for someone who is genuinely interested in how chocking can take place it is very useful.
 * I love in the section labeled "Nutrition and Health" how in depth the detail regarding how dinosaurs and animals in the past have developed our chewing habits was presented.