User:Inexperienced Egg/Culture of Morocco/April.k0ala Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Inexperienced Egg


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Inexperienced%20Egg/Culture_of_Morocco?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Culture of Morocco

Evaluate the drafted changes
The "lead" of the manuscripts section provides interesting context for the regulation and production of manuscripts. It may read better, however, under the "19th century manuscripts" subtitle (unless this regulation was present throughout the history of Moroccan manuscripts). At the moment it lacks a citation. Be sure to cite your sources using Wikipedia's footnote style; this is streamlined through the "Cite" button on the toolbar. Your "Scripts" subsection is very cohesive and coherent. You also provide a more holistic view of scripts by referencing the different types of scripts used and not giving unbalanced attention to one script in particular. Since you're looking at 19th century manuscripts, I wonder if you could specify what Kingdom was actively ruling at that time. In the "genres" section, if you keep the phrasing "According to Abdulrazak..." you should provide context to who he -- is he a leading scholar? Does he have his own Wikipedia page to which you can link? You primarily draw from Abdulrazak's dissertation. If possible, maybe you could read the sources he cites to add more references to this section. The organization of subsection within "Manuscripts" is clear and logical. Furthermore, the structuring of information within each subsection is strong. Another strength of this article draft is the overall tone and balance. You effectively employ wiki links throughout the draft, connecting terms to other articles within Wikipedia. There are already two images of Maghrebi script in the original article. Maybe you can move these images into your section and/or look for one-two images on Wiki Media to visually illustrate your "Manuscript" section -- visually enhancing your contributions. Overall well done! I'm looking forward to seeing your published contributions!