User:Infinite Writers/Jane Eyre (character)/Seahorseswimming Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Infinite Writers is the work I'm reviewing and their article is on Jane Eyre.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Sandbox Draft: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Infinite%20Writers/Jane_Eyre_%28character%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Bibliography: User:Infinite Writers/Jane Eyre (character)/Bibliography


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Jane Eyre (character)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

In this article so far everything is relevant to the topic; looks like Infinite Writers has some good additions they plan on making. I based this off of the bibliography since there wasn't anything written in the sandbox draft at the time I'm writing this review. They have some good sources listed and have some good ideas on the topic to add to the article at some point. The article seems to be written in a neutral light as well. The "Analysis" portion of the article is underrepresented, as well as the "In other literature" portion, which I think Infinite Writers is planning to add their information in because their bibliography sources would fit really well in that portion. Everything else in the article seems to be equally represented, it's just the two I listed above really lacking information. All the citations, in the article and even in the bibliography, work and have credible sources that support the information presented on the topic. Throughout the article each statement has a citation from a credible source whether it be a book, website, etc. and those unbiased sources do support the information and back it up. Most of the information seems to be up to date, it is an older subject to have an article about so some of those sources are a little older, but they still do their job of backing up the information. Again, the only areas that really need information added is the "Analysis" and "In other literature" sections. This article needs some more work, but so far so good and I think Infinite Writers is heading in the right direction to improving it.