User:Inmh/House of Romanov/Tbeaisasn579779257 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/users/Inmh


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Inmh/House_of_Romanov?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * House of Romanov

Evaluate the drafted changes
First off, I will say there are a lot of sources and overall the article seems neutral. Although many sources needed to be added. But it seems that you already know that. As for suggestions on organization I think it makes no sense why remains are held before the execution. So I think it should be execution, remains, and current family. Just to make it sound a lot more clearly. Also I think adding images like of current members, or evidence of the remain could also help your article. The main suggestion I will give is to expanded. Much of the information is from the main article so I recommend to find sources, and add new sentences to improve the article. Overall though good job. Remember if you have any difficultly feel free to contact the professor as I know evidence for this topic may be difficult (trust me I had to restart my article because I didn't have enough sources).