User:InstantPineapple/The Darkest Child/Sarahcm12 Peer Review

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InstantPineapple
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 * User:InstantPineapple/The Darkest Child:

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

Your review is effective and concise. I reader is able to gain a basic understand of the work from your introduction. The note about the original title is an interesting piece of information as well.

Content:

The content that has been added is relevant to the work, up-to-date, and gives an effective synopsis of the story. Your character list is detailed and well done, but I would go into further detail on the themes of the novel.

Tone and Balance:

The contents of this page are strictly informative and neutral.

Sources and References:

Using more sources cited fro scholarly material would improve your article. Because there is only two, it is hard to see from where your information is sourced.

Organization:

The content is grammatically correct and well organized. Consider turning your Themes section and Characters section into headings, not just subheadings under Article Body.

Images and Media:

I'm sure this will be a later addition, but consider adding a photo of the book cover.

Overall impression:

Your page is extremely informative and your included information is clear and concise. Great job at remaining neutral and crafting an unbiased synopsis.