User:Intellectual pixie/Lyric Shen/Dancer4949 Peer Review

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Intellectual Pixie


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 * User:Intellectual pixie/Lyric Shen


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Your article is concise and to the point; I like how it includes relevant information about Lyric's activism and art, as well as where they have been showcased and exhibited. I also think you have good sources you chose, since you pull from a magazine, an exhibition catalog, and an academy of art article. The only feedback I have is to utilize the "Art" section of the article to showcase some of Lyric's most noteworthy art, maybe even including background on the art pieces (i.e. - what they represent, where they were exhibited, etc.). Otherwise, I think you could also elaborate on your last statement in the article body to dive deeper into how Lyric has used art to further their political activism. Overall, great work!