User:IntheHeartofTexas/Indiscriminate monitoring/BunnyShampoo Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username) IntheHeartofTexas
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:IntheHeartofTexas/sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? No
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? No
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? No
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? overly detailed

Lead evaluation: The lead being told like an essay so it is not being concise. It gives an overview of what will be said.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? N/A
 * Is the content added up-to-date? N/A
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? N/A
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? N/A

Content evaluation There is little to no content.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? N/A
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? N/A
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? N/A
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?N/A

Tone and balance evaluation: There is not much tone in the comment as it is just headings.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? N/A
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?N/A
 * Are the sources current?N/A
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?N/A
 * Check a few links. Do they work?N/A

Sources and references evaluation: There is no source or refrences

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? N/A
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?N/A
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?N/A

Organization evaluation There is no content

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? N/A
 * Are images well-captioned?N/A
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?N/A
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?N/A

Images and media evaluation There is no images or media

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject? N/A
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?N/A
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?N/A
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable? N/A

New Article Evaluation There is no sources or links to other Wikipedia

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? N/A
 * What are the strengths of the content added?N/A
 * How can the content added be improved?N/A

Overall evaluation It was an incomplete draft, so it is hard to evaluate any content or source.