User:IonaMink/Maternal wall/Plantl0v3r Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

IonaMink


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:IonaMink/Maternal_wall?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Maternal wall

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Content
The content added was relevant and up to date. I believe it would be helpful to add more to the historical background on the original article, as the article does not have much information on how the idea of the maternal wall came to be. It would also be helpful to elaborate on the mommy track and motherhood penalty sections, as well as work-life balance, considering they are interconnected ideas with the maternal wall.

Tone and Balance
The content that was added in the draft is written from a neutral perspective.

Sources and References
The references added are reliable sources of information, as they are peer reviewed articles and federal agencies.

Organization
The content is well written and is a great start to editing the Maternal Wall Wikipedia page.