User:Iperri2/sandbox

Article Evaluation

 * The "history section of this article could have been much longer and elaborate
 * Also in the history section, they mention that later in 2018 they may be changing the theme of this ride, which is misplaced because it's more "future" than "history"
 * It mentions that the wait for this ride is long, but it should give a more specific wait time (ex: one hour)
 * In the "Ride" section, it doesn't mention that it's designed to look like the streets of California
 * The description of the ride could have been much more extensive
 * The height requirement for this ride should not be under the "soundtrack' section

Article Topics
1. Fraternities and Sororities https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fraternities_and_sororities - I would add in more details in the academic section. More specifics about why greeks GPAs are better would be beneficial. I will input information specifically under the "Academic Performance" section. This relates to this class as we want to add about academics and the benefits to using each other as resources were this class demonstrated how to use different resources.

2. Friends https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Friends - I would add more details under the section "Season 7." More information could be provided to give insight on what truly goes on. This relates to this course because it is a tv series so it uses technology, television specifically, in order to convey a message to the viewer.

3. Fashion Merchandising: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fashion_merchandising - I would insert information under the "Education" section. It does not provide enough information on what all you need to learn and experience before working in the fashion industry. I would be able to provide this information. This relates to this course because we have been learning how people are always looking for information and who they want it immediately. So for someone new to the fashion industry, they would probably want to know what it takes to reach their goals. This information could be provided to them through a Wikipedia search, and they would have the information they needed quickly.

Link to Group
User:Hrase1/sandbox