User:Ird003/Pacific seahorse/Irisbishins Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I reviewed User:Ird003's article on Pacific seahorses.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ird003/Pacific_seahorse?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pacific_seahorse?action=edit

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think User:Ird003's is off to a great start however there are a few grammatical errors that need to be cleaned up. In the main unedited article I think it would be beneficial for User:Ird003 to focus on the Evolutionary history of seahorses which is something they have not examined yet in their sandbox.