User:Ird003/Pacific seahorse/Oaj002 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ird003


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ird003/Pacific_seahorse?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pacific seahorse

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

For the lead, citing the information that the Pacific seahorse is the largest species of seahorse in a correct format would strengthen the edit. Also, inserting the edit in a place that makes sense in the lead would help improve the article, such as after the second sentence. Something that may make the edits stronger overall would be finding more sources to back up your claims. The sources you have so far seem to be reliable sources, which is a strength. The Evolutionary history seems like it is very bare, and may strengthen the article to add more information to this section.