User:Irisbishins/Japanese eel/Netasha8 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Irisbishins


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Irisbishins/Japanese_eel?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Japanese eel

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

For just starting in the sandbox, the content is neutral and easy to read. The Lead is lacking. The content is backed up by a reliable source. There are a few grammatical/spelling errors. This content has improved the article overall, but the addition itself can just use some more content with more sources.