User:Irj456/Covert racism/Carrington24 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Irj456


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Irj456/Covert_racism?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great work on getting in a lot of content/information already! I really like how you all broke up the sections and the heading titles.

A few suggestions I have:

- The first sentences of the first two paragraphs are relatively confusing, although the rest of the paragraph is clear. Thus, maybe try to make these sentences more clear?

- Potentially add links to other Wikipedia pages for key terms like "microagressions" and "othering"

- Need quotations for these words?: ghetto, hood, and sketchy

- Would including ways scholars suggest addressing covert racism be beneficial/acceptable to add?

Great work overall!