User:Irj456/Covert racism/Lm1214 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Irj456/Covert racism


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall provides a great amount of information regarding De-Facto Racism along with the background of it. Details allow those who aren't familiar with the topic to fully grasp the concept. Concise and clear information. Suggestions: If possible, add more information in the political advertising section of the page. It seems as though the News section is overbearing the Covert Racism section as a whole, when compared to the information given for political advertising. Ensure certain parts dont overbear others, or too much/too little information is given.