User:Irvingca/Psychopharmacology/JulesUAB Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Irvingca


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Irvingca/Psychopharmacology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Psychopharmacology

Evaluate the drafted changes
I agree that the article as it stands, does have some grammatical errors. The content is very informative; covering specific psychopharmacological substance and even going as far to explain how the body processes and reacts to the substances under "Chemical signaling" and "Psychopharmacological substances". I agree that the page could benefit from adding current psychopharmacological research articles. With Irvingca's contributions, the addition of the three up to date articles that they've cited would make the page more current and provide new information. While I wasn't able to access the first two articles that were suggested, Classical hallucinogens and neuroimaging: A systematic review of human studies: Hallucinogens and neuroimaging, provides information on specific hallucinogenics and their long term effects on the body and brain. I believe that adding this article and drafting an article summary would provide more depth on hallucinogens to the page. The edits that Irvingca has drafted for the Hallucinogens section already provides current information; continuous drafting could expand on how psilocybin, for example, affects the brain (increases visual cortex activity). Overall, the edits positively contribute to the page by use of current information and expansion of content already present in the article. Good work!