User:Isabella.mitrow/Shrek/Harveyfolger14 Peer Review

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Great job with hyper links and with explaining the plot and giving an overall summary of the film. I think perhaps the body of the writing has a bit too much enthusiasm implying some biases throughout the article while it is supposed to be a factual non opinionated article. Other than this great job. I think other than this you have a great article!