User:Isabella.randle/Evaluate an Article

I evaluated the article about Tomball High School (https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Isabella.randle/Evaluate_an_Article&action=edit).

In my opinion, this article does not have any irrelevant information.

I recognized three out-of-date/incomplete pieces of information in the article. The first is that in the opening sentence, it calls the high school "Tomball Senior High School." The name of the high school is just "Tomball High School." The second is that is says the cougar sculpture in the front of the school was donated by a Magnolia artist, but does not cite this or say the name of the artist. The third is that the articles says that Tomball High School is in the 5A category for sports. This is correct, but as of next year, the school will be 6A.

A lot about this article could be improved. The article could have one or more photos of Tomball High School. The article could say who the administrators are at the school. The article could talk about the school in the news (such as when a student came to school in a KKK costume in 2016). The article could say what the campus amenities are. It could provide more information on sports and other clubs, and could include state and national championship awards. It could include statistics on enrollment and graduation rates.

The article is neutral.

Most of the citations that do exist work and are relevant, however, many of the claims in the article are not supported by any citations.

There are a few conversations about the article that resulted in information being deleted from the article. The most interesting conversation was about putting school clubs on the website. Someone said that information should not exist on the Wikipedia article page because it's not important, and the information comes directly from the school's website so it's not meant for Wikipedia. I disagree.

The article is rated as start-class, low-importance for three WikiProjects: WikiProject Houston, WikiProject United States/Texas, and WikiProject Schools.

The people discussing the article on the talk page were a lot less nice than the examples we saw on WikiEdu.