User:Isabella10185/Gender and religion/Noahbei Peer Review

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Isabella10185
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The content added about Adam and Eve did a good job to fill out that section. This section kept the neutral which is good. It also helped to clarify the text that was already there.

For this part you added, "One aspect every religion has in common is modesty among women" maybe say every major world religion or something along those lines because there might be one without modesty. Just a thought.

For this part, "There can be many reasons why women specifically are taught to cover up or dress according to a standard, but most reasons are sourced through official religious publications", the first part of the sentence is talking about reasons why women are taught to cover up and the second part is talking about where they came from. Maybe change the sentence structure if you want to include both of these. Easy way is to just remove the "but".

The gendered clothing and religion was a good addition because it wasn't in the article. This part does keep a neutral tone. The citations in this part are also good for the info that you added.

The last two sentences need some grammar adjustments, I just put it into Grammarly and some stuff came up for that part.

The image that you chose is a really good one, it adds to the text that you added very well. The caption is good and it is positioned well in the article

Overall the edits add some good information that wasn't in the article before. I would just check the last paragraph to make sure everything sounds good/has proper grammar.