User:IsabellaCaria/Social media in the fashion industry/Hparks2024 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Aesoteropoulos, SashaGluzberg, Taylordostie, Jatargove, IsabellaCaria


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Social media in the fashion industry
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
A noticeable change that could be made is in the Youtube section. Every other section within the article provides an example, whether its a specific company, website, or app. You could possibly add specific Youtube channels that generate content about fashion trends or do reviews on certain brands or products.

You could also add in some citations from other resources involving research about fashion in the media, as most of the article is just written by the user, and while there is a reference section there are no actual references with citations within the article.

I think the layout and organization of this article is great. Everything is clearly labeled and progresses in a way that makes sense.

I only saw two images on the page, so I think it might be beneficial to add more images within the different sections of the article, maybe of some of the celebrities or brands/products that are mentioned throughout.

Some of the words in the section titles should probably have capital first letters, I feel like it would make the article look cleaner and more professional.