User:IsabellaCarufel/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources. *I was confused by the evaluation at first and did my evaluation in separate notes so I am making those corrections now ~

Option 1

 * Sustainable Fashion


 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead Section
 * - there is a lead section
 * - good length
 * Content
 * - organized content box
 * - a lot of different subsections
 * Tone and Balance
 * - there is a little bit of bias in the tone about what “needs” to happen
 * - other than the beginning it’s neutral
 * Organization and Writing Quality
 * - I like the background aspect
 * - has a purpose section -
 * Sourcing
 * - could use more sources linked in sentences
 * Imaging and Media
 * - could use more powerful and useful images
 * Overall impressions
 * - the article content is good but lacks citations (which suggests it’s original research) and parts do not reflect encyclopedic tone
 * Talk section
 * - There is a large talk section
 * - A lot of peer reviews and good suggestion
 * - could use more powerful and useful images
 * Overall impressions
 * - the article content is good but lacks citations (which suggests it’s original research) and parts do not reflect encyclopedic tone
 * Talk section
 * - There is a large talk section
 * - A lot of peer reviews and good suggestion
 * - There is a large talk section
 * - A lot of peer reviews and good suggestion

Option 2

 * Social media in the fashion industry
 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead Section
 * - too long, could better organized
 * Content
 * - good start for content
 * - could add more about influencers
 * - could use more about fast fashion since this is a big part of the intersection of fashion and social media
 * - expand facebook section
 * - add twitter
 * Tone and Balance
 * - uses neutral, encyclopedic tone
 * Organization and Writing Quality
 * - could have better organization
 * - not great writing quality, lacks flow
 * - needs grammar editing possibly
 * Sourcing
 * - citations are not constant
 * - looks like it could use additional citations
 * Imaging and Media
 * Overall impressions
 * - good start but needs a lot of organizational work
 * Talk section
 * - a lot of activity and good call outs
 * Imaging and Media
 * Overall impressions
 * - good start but needs a lot of organizational work
 * Talk section
 * - a lot of activity and good call outs
 * - a lot of activity and good call outs

Option 3

 * fashion week
 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead Section
 * - very short
 * Content
 * - lacks content
 * - doesn’t even cover ready to wear
 * - could use a section about influencers
 * - could add a section about controversies within fashion week (PETA, body image, diversity, etc)
 * Tone and Balance
 * - see now buy now needs to be expanded
 * Organization and Writing Quality
 * - writing is grammatically correct
 * -sections feel to brief
 * Sourcing
 * - sources are good and clear
 * Imaging and Media
 * - could use more photos, especially about the different types of fashion in shows
 * Overall impressions
 * - current revision of the page has started
 * - needs a lot of work
 * Talk section
 * - has not been updated since 2020
 * - could use more photos, especially about the different types of fashion in shows
 * Overall impressions
 * - current revision of the page has started
 * - needs a lot of work
 * Talk section
 * - has not been updated since 2020
 * Talk section
 * - has not been updated since 2020