User:Isabella Gunderson/Apprehension (understanding)/Mariodg20 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article looks like it can be pretty interesting to read when it's completely done and for now I agree with you that lead the lead is pretty straight.


 * 1) The lead includes a brief description of the articles major's sections so, it's good!
 * 2) Theres not content yet or probably I didn't find it but ones it's done it's going to be good because this article sounds interesting!
 * 3) The content of this article is perfectly to persuade the readers!
 * 4) The links works pretty well.
 * 5) Everything has good grammatical sentences.
 * 6) It doesn't have images.
 * 7) The article contains all the Wikipedia notability requirements.
 * 8) The article is not done yet but is going very well!