User:Isabellaortegaa19/Cultural psychology/Sunflowerkarli Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Isabellaortegaa19


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Isabellaortegaa19/Cultural_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cultural psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
The changes that were made really tied in the concept being described, in a concise manner. The overall tone sounds neutral and the content is relevant to the topic, making it more complete. One thing that really sticks out if the lack of citations within the text. The information provided is great but citations are necessary within the paragraph even though, it seems like citations were added but I think there should be citations inserted within the paragraph with the numbers (I do not recall the name).