User:Isabelle.Rose13/Gender roles in childhood/Gqc5313 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Isabelle.Rose13


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Isabelle.Rose13/Gender_roles_in_childhood?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
LEAD:

I think the lead is very good. It had provided an outlook as to what will be in the whole content. I think this was a very good lead to introduce the content to us in a way that doesnt provide with opinions but instead facts. Great intro.

CONTENT:

The article body was very very good. the information was all displayed in "order", it all flowed very well. I think your body was truly very informative and it was easy to follow and I understood your topic very well at the end of it all. The conclusion also was able to tie every point you're made in the paragraph very well as well. It showed that

TONE:

The tone of your article is again, informative. It does not provide opinions as to what it "should" be or what they "should" do. Its all just displaying facts which I think was very good for the overall topic.

SOURCES AND REFERENCES:

The references are done correctly and all displayed within the paragraphs correctly. No problems with this.