User:Isabelle.Rose13/Gender roles in childhood/Mzimet Peer Review

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I am reviewing Isabelle.Rose13's page. This author does an amazing job of refraining from biased and argumentative perspectives and shows strength in employing factual information in regards to the development of socialized gender roles within children. Considering the vast range of research surrounding social cognitive theory and the many facets that contribute to the development of gender based roles, Isabelle does an amazing job at including relevant information. In the past century there is a significant amount of research surrounding this topic and Isabelle wonderfully summarizes the most significant findings in a comprehensive and comprehendible manner. The content presented holds a neutral tone with credible information seen in her use of peer reviewed journals and research articles. The author includes relevant findings from the past few years to bolster the current research's most relevant findings. The article could improver, however, from including topics revolving around the intersection of gender role development and non-binary perspectives. However, this may be challenging considering most of the research analyzing gender role development is rooted in strong binary ideologies. Overall the authors content as strength in its factual and non biased presentation as well as it's relevance and filling gaps in the knowledge of the research.


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 * User:Isabelle.Rose13/Gender roles in childhood
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 * Gender roles in childhood
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 * Gender roles in childhood

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