User:Isah1998/Machiavellianism (psychology)/DET313205 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Isah1998


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Isah1998/Machiavellianism_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Machiavellianism (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

You have added quite a bit of information to your article and the information about data gathering is substantial. However, the first couple of sentences of your bolded edit were a bit confusing for me at first. Speaking of confusing, I had an issue with the very last sentence of your added edit, specifically the phrase "non-consensual behavior". In the context of trolling behaviors, I am not sure to what this is actually referring. When I see non-consensual, I immediately think of sexual harassment of some sort but I am not sure if this is the actual goal since such harassment seems distinctly severe in comparison to cyberbullying and technological infidelity.

Besides this, the citations and tone of the writing are well done and seemingly well-researched.