User:Isah1998/Machiavellianism (psychology)/Emjo2000 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Isah1998


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Isah1998/Machiavellianism_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Machiavellianism (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that the changes you made are beneficial, and I am pleased to see that your links/sources are informative and still working. Your additions have added to the article as a whole, but I wonder if there may be more information you could find. I would recommend moving "More recent research suggests that while Machiavellianism and psychopathy overlap heavily, they are distinct personality constructs. Psychopathy differs from Machiavellianism only in impulsivity, a lack of long term planning and self control, as psychopaths tend to be reckless," after your contribution in the "Narcissism and psychopathy" section to make the paragraph as a whole more cohesive. Great work so far! ~Emjo2000