User:Isah1998/Machiavellianism (psychology)/JeTTblxck Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Isah1998


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 * User:Isah1998/Machiavellianism (psychology)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Machiavellianism (psychology)

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I believe the section you added to "Narcissism and Psychopathy" helps to better clarify the statements discussed above in the paragraph, however I think your section could benefit from more references that could include the data and study results you mentioned. I think including the link between addictive behavior and the other 2 dark triad traits, narcissism and psychopathy is important but I was not entirely certain how you related that to Machiavellianism, aside from it being a member of the dark triad as well. Since earlier in that section, it was clearly defined that while Machiavellianism and psychopathy overlap in many aspects they still are two separate constructs, you might benefit from explaining more in detail how exactly Machiavellianism in specific correlates with the data and traits you mentioned. I think the section you added to "Hot and Cold Empathy" was well thought out and constructed, and it gives a modern sense of how instances involving Machiavellianism could be interpreted in today's society while still remaining neutral in tone. Overall, I believe your contributions are helping to add depth and understanding to this topic. Good work!