User:IsaiahCastro/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Bust of Cleopatra - Wikipedia

Why have you chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article to evaluate because I think the history and archeology of ancient cultures is interesting. It matters because the article is about a bust statue of Cleopatra discovered in Alexandria, Egypt at the site of Cleopatra's sunken palace on the island of Antirhodos, it could tell us a number of things about Cleopatra and ancient Egypt. My first impressions of the article was that it appeared to be decent but could use a little bit more work.

Evaluate the article
The lead of this article is clear and concise, does not have irrelevant information, and describes what the article will be about, but it lacks a brief description of the article's major sections. The content of the article is relevant and up to date, but it could benefit from a longer cultural analysis section. The article lists 29 working sources of information and more links all relevant to the topic and written by different people. All of the sources are reliable from Oxford, Cambridge, or Museum documentations. But the most current source is from 2010 which may not be a problem because the bust is way older than that. The article is well organized and written clearly without spelling mistakes. The article consists of multiple pictures of the same bust all from different angles, most are visually appealing and well captioned, but the article would benefit from adding a picture of where the bust was found. There is only one entry on the talk page, and it suggest a name change for the article because the current name is confusing because there are multiple existing Cleopatra busts, I agree. It is a part of multiple Wiki Projects. The article is not bad, it is very clear and informative, but it could benefit from the changes suggested above. I would say this article is 75% developed.